Humsafar ,Part 14

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Freedom :-

Maan entered the dargah and just sat there and after his dad and grand father he first time almost broke down ……………

He want to scream ut the silent tear fall down he bowed his head and prayed to give her all love, peace if it’s to go away from him then ok….he will, her peace , her smile r matter the most  ….

He wipes his tear and come out and found his whole family is waiting for him, his whole family what a irony of his life that his love, his life , his wife is there but who accused him , who blame him for her condition……he turn his face but oblivious to see the pain in her eyes now who is feeling guilty to hurt him…….

Geet want to say sorry as she didn’t mean to say those word or hurt him but she fear and she know she is cursed person ……she try to looked at maan who sat besides driver seat when ma and dadi ma told him to sat besides geet who is sulking and almost verge to cry but trying best to supress the tears but failed to do so….

They reach KM but before ma or dadi ma can say anything maan just come out from the car and entered the KM when ma said iye kya usne they should entered together…..but ….

Dadi ma sighed and said bahu we will talk about this later let’s get inside….

Ma and dadi ma took a sad upset geet in side the KM , they took geet in her room when her eyes just looking for the one man whom she just reject, accused, blame and push him……….

Geet cried when maan try to console her but they know only maan can do it but who once enter the room and shut the door …….

Dadi ma said to nakul to call maan who refuse to come and said don’t disturb him………..

Full night ma and dadi ma can’t hel but give one sleeping pill to geet to make her sleep but next day  they wake up to get another shock of the day as maan is running down with a bag and he just came and stop infront of his ma and dadi ma and said I need to go for some work , I’ll inform u both when I’ll reach there…….

Geet felt the soil beneath from her feet will gone anytime…she look at maan who ignore her presence and took ma and dadi ma’s blessing when ma said but beta geet need u u marry to her when maan said without looking back ma that was not marriage , that was just an act to save her as with her my reputation and image also was in tact and I need to clear it……….

Geet whimpered in pain when ma said maan , mind ur langugage what r u syaing when maan turn and said y ma,do u think I love this girl and will marry sorry u already know that I hate marraiges and now more…….

Ma almost try to slap maan who look at ma painfully then said and another ting I guess she is fine now, I told my assitant to check her up then if she feel our hospital can discharge her….when she felt……and then maan turn and left from there when dadi ma just sat on the couch with thud and said what is wrong with maan……..

When geet felt numb with this all, she just want to save him from her curse luck and here he thought for her like this, he want her to go away from him………she turn and reache to her room not it’s just guest room for her……..

She sat in the bed and feeling nothing only vacant created in her heart……..she smiles sadly and think it’s good for everyone and it’s serve her right………she did it , she start it, she send him away and she deserve it but how she will be survive without him…………….how she will be?

She turn and look a note , she fear to open it , she can’t take any more pain or shock now.but still she opened it but get another shock of her life

Miss Geet

I will not say anything in my defence but only say ur wish is always my comand and when u felt I’m caging u so for ur good I’m giving u the freedom, from now u will never see any Dr khurana to cause problm or trying to cage u in his place.u can go anywhere or do anyting u r free from my side

Thanks and yes ur discharge paper is ready when u felt take it

Dr khurana………..

She shouts Baba jee , y me, y me……………………she felt her self suffocating, something making her drowning in pain, darkness, numb………..y her fate is like that , y she will always be suffer cause of other, y her fate never make her happy or see little happiness what is the life, only tear, darkness,………….y her life is so much surse fill……………

She moaned ,she screamed, she just want to say y she did it but will she ever be able to do it?suddenly a spasm  of pain hit her and a blank thing cover her eyes and then she don’t know anything before darkness absorb her completely………….

Here in some where else maan stopped the car and punched the streeing in pain guilt and agony to hurt her, as if it’s hurting his heart , parting away from her as if cutting his heart to give it to her………….he screamed in pain, moaned her name ,…………..when tear of failure, pain r flowing from his eyes……………….he is feeling deafeted by his own fate…………he can’t make her understand he is there then she don’t need to fear…………he can’t make her feel good, he make her feel suffocated , caged, he didn’t able to put the trust …..he can’t able to build confidence on her……….his love is failure…………..but whatever it’s he will always love her………..for that if needed he will take everyone’s curse but will give only happiness and if that is means her freedom from him…………..but it’s true that freedom from him will make her happiness………….

After couple of hours Ma and dadi ma r walking to and forth in front of the cabin where geet admitted for check her up, as she is not almost responding…..and Ma informed maan to come back soon…………

Here, Doctor came out and said I’m sorry to say but …..

When ma and dadi ma felt tensed and panick , ma said doctor pls say what happen?

Doctor look himself tensed and said she suffered from attack and it can be major but more problem is she is not responding well, we put and give enough medicine and make her stable but the stress and the attack and more her unwilling to co operate us or respond in our treatment…….

Dadi ma sat down with holding her heart, ma felt pain what is going when the young girl will see little bit happiness , little bit light for herself………..

When some one said what happen to my geet?

Ma turn and just slapped him and said my geet what happen to u  Dr khurana when u blamed her almost, accused her and told her to go away?I don’t know u r so selfish so narrow mind……..it’s cause of u the poor girl is infront of death , infront of darkness…….y maan y u r so selffish if u don’t want to marry her then y u filled her mang to send her in darkness, more pain…………y maan………….y?

Maan look blankly at ma he didn’t flinch but the he flinch the moment his ma mentioned about her pain, how she is suffering how she is infront of death……….he closed his eyes but slowly moved and asked doctor about geet then told her to sfit to the spl cabin as he will take care of her now……..

When ma roared don’t worry Dr khurana , don’t bother urself for my daughter go and enjoy ur life………..and she try to pull him when dadi ma stopped ma when ma said ma do u till believe this man……….

Dadi ma nodded yes and pulled angry ma when maan slowly entered the cabin…….Later geet shifted to the spl cabin which has spl facility of ICU and mordern technology………full 50hrs they observe an unconscious geet…….under maan’s spl care who forget to eat or drink even take breath, his full time going to make his life fine…….every day and night he cried silently .he ask for her forgiveness……he never want to hurt her. How can he would hurt her when it’s cause pain to him, it cause bleed his heart which is already bleeding due to his mistake……….y he didn’t try to understand her but like others left her to face the pain, problem alone………..when he know how much she loves him, yes he knows she love him but she will not tell him ever confessed him….cause of her fear, he know her problem her inhabitation stil y he behaved like that, shouldn’t he behaved maturely………

He cried and prayed for her well being………he just sat there and taking care of her………..

Almost 2and half days geet open her eyes slowly when nurse called doctor and maan as all went for round…….and maan went to meet one of his old patient when he got the news and he almost ran towards her cabin…..he fear to face her …..but he know he can’t ran away , he need to face to make her well, he need to redeem himself….

Maan entered the room and geet look at him but her eyes r full blank………….maan felt to kill himself for this, he has chat with his fellow doctor but his eyes didn’t left his geet when a doctor (psychiatrist) asked her well miss geet but maan cut her and said it’s Mrs Khurana……..Mrs Geet Maan Singh Khurana…….

When geet turn as her filled with tear the blank eyes showing pain……..and asking sorry , she try to say something but voice didn’t come……..her eyes turn in panic when maan also understand the unsaid word and fear same…..he quickly went near to geet…..

What an irony of a life for them they met in different situation she lost her voice he make her come back but desinty make them again going them to take another test and the world is round they felt now, situation from which they over come again they r facing…….but who is at fault this time ………….

Maan can see geet is start pancking and try to viloate in pain and fear when maan told everyone to out from there and hold geet and said shhh geetu…..don’t worry ,nothing is happen….shhhhh but geet just wriggling to get free herself as the words of maan also ringing and finally she can’t take and just lost the conscious again……

Later geet gain the conscious but didn’t say anything just turn her face ….in pain…but maan know he did wrong but this time and he will do anything to make her like before……

Ma and dadi ma came to meet geet and ma completely ignore maan who didn’t say a word but dadi ma can understand the pain both maaneet r feeling….

Ma felt cause of maan today geet again in same position…….

Ma want to take geet but doctor didn’t give the permission  as they also clueless y again the same situation y she is not speaking again……But maan may be know the reason……his ignorance, his accusation his word make her like this…………

Slowly geet start respond but aloof from maan…….After few days geet start talking……………

Slowly slowly geet has talk with all but this is only monosyllebus but with maan she didn’t speak a word as if her pain and guilt stop her from doing so.but maan didn’t mind as he know y the reason………

Next few day maan forget everything but giving her his love, care , taking care of her…….when slowly geet is melting or feeling more guilty…….she don’t know  what is this feeling…….she is angry upset on maan y he said those another side she is feeling guilty as his words lead them to this way……

She closed her eyes and thinks one thing maan his happines his well being her only pririty and she know now his reaction action all related to her…….her word make him react like that , the control man, calm man break her emotion , can’t control his emotion …….she get up and noticed maan is sleeping in the couch she look at him ,his face showing pale, tiredness…..

She felt like cried, curse herself….cause of her, the man is suffering…….y she can’t move on and accept him, y she is giving him pain who only give her happiness ,always trying to protect her…….

Y she is fearing for her past, is her past so imp  than the love, care she is getting from him, his family, ma, dadi ma……..

She sat on the bed…….and thinking about her life, how people always make her life hell when the contrary of the life she got maan, ma , dadi ma who r like angel for her , they always care for her, give her all love, care and most imp respect……first time in the life she felt like human who can normaly live the life.they give her new life, new recognition, new name ,love, respect ………….how can she deny it cause of her fear…………she need to face her fear but a loud thunder strike and it’s like something broken out side and the sound if strom then another loud thunder and make geet almost screamed maaannnnn……

Maan get up and noticed and quickly run to her and called geet ,what happen, when geet just hugged maan tightly in fear……

Maan at first shock then hugged her back and patted her back and try to reduce her fear when she is just clinging like kid ……..After some time when geet felt relax , she noticed where is she , she felt shiver on her spine …….and embarassed she softly parted then softly said I feel scared…….oh thunder…….

Maan cupped her face and said when I’m here there is nothing to fear geet……….

Geet hold his hand which is cupping her cheek she lowered her eyes when drops of tears fall from her eyes ………..she sobbed, shivered when maan felt almered and said what happen geet?

But geet said I’m sorry………….

Maan stop and just don’t know what to say when geet whimper but her head lowered when maan said geet but she just said I don’t deserve u………..u deserve some one best……I fear to loose u by my curse ful life by my illfate, by my past………………

She look at maan who said no geetu…………….but geet just said y u r so nice……I don’t deserve this….I hurt u, giving u only pain…………..

Maan nodded no and said no geetu, u can never hurt me……………

But geet look at maan and said then y u left me? Y u want to give me freedom or u want to free urself from me …………….

Maan left speechless he lowered his eyes when geet hold his face and said u hate me maan…..for my past………..

Maan almost snapped her N said don’t be crazy geetu how can I hate u….u r my life………..I’m sorry I was just drown in my sorrow so much and neglect to see the trauma u r facing…………I’m sorry…………..

But this geet hit him and said no u hate me……….u left me……..I did a mistake but y u left me…….y u want to give me freedom…………y maan y…………….and now u r not punishing me for my mistake….y u nice……………

Maan felt little puzzle then can understand her mind condition one side she is feeling guilty and another side she is angry on him , upset on him………..he just pull her in his arm and kissed her forehead and said I’m sorry I’ll never give u that freedom always make u stay here and I’m not nice see if I’ll punish u for hurting my geet like this …….when geet look at him but maan just smiles and again pull her………..when geet sobbed, cried almost break down, she complaint y he left her…y he didn’t fight y didn’t make her understand, y he is not punishing her……………when maan took all her compaliant .she explain feared for her past, how much she want to move on but can’t her past is like shackles ………………

Geet looked at him and said I love u maan………………But u deserve some one better ………………I don’t deserve this.I’m curs but maan just placed his finger on her lips and said dare u geet…………..r u feeling it’s all shackles for u………….. when geet nodded no then maan said then y the need of freedom or do u want to punish me for not understanding ur pain and left u…………

Geet nodded no then maan said y geet, y do u fear about ur past……..Geet didn’t say anything just stay there silently when maan said oh geet!!!!!!!!! Don’t be. do u trust me na then don’t fear………….

Geet again about to say something when maan said not now….u r not fine fully and u………u need rest………

Maan lowered geet in the bed and try to move when geet hold his hand and said softly I……but she just lowered her eyes as she don’t know what to say does she has the right on him any more as friend also………..she bit her lips to supress the moan of cry………

When maan slide besides her and wipes her tear drop and said whatever happen between us cause we have the right to fight but we have the right to  put our rights on each other………

Geet just look at him with new hope may be she can live. When maan patted her for sleep with a promise he will erase all her nightmare to fill with it’s beautiful dreams…………….

Disclaimer :- this story & concept solely belong to me and my property if any one try to copy without telling me or try to take this  & try to copy & paste it any where then I’ll take legal action against him or her , pls don’t copy this FF & it’s concept

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